Script Feedback

What feedback was there on the script?
What way could we have bettter used our time?

After acting out our script, we recieved some feedback on how to make it better. One such feedback was that our script was not as realistic as it could be. This scene was when our main character was leaving his sisters. We decided that the brother would leave the children without telling them because it seemed more realistic. I think we could have better used our time by doing much more acting rather than talking about the script because then we could have edited the script better. I think we also should have been much more focused and this will help us to achieve more in the next lesson.